Monday, October 24, 2011

Paragraph Editing

Copy and paste the following paragraph into your blog. Find and correct as many spelling, punctuation and usage (grammar) errors as you can.


Mark DeMontis

courage canada founder Mark DeMontis, a 23 year old blind hockey player, inline skated from Toronto across five provinces and 5,000 km to Vancouver to raise awareness about blind hockey. he founded Courage Canada with the vision of bringing the Blind to the ice. one reader of mark's story said I fell that this story is moving and will contribut people to get aware blind hockey. Mark demontis has courage because he blind and he skated from toronto to vancouver he had the courage to move on through the weather through the pain and made it to vancouver. he He had raised money to help those in need and i fell that is courage.


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  1. I found all the mistakes that you wrote in this pargarph By: Cody Lawson

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